Lexington, KY
Stay calm. Nineteen-year-old
Melissa “Missy” Donovan waited outside the ring after a clean run on her horse,
Rebel. An entire swarm of butterflies flitted through her innards, leaving her
mildly nauseous. They’d made great time over the jumps, and no bars went down.
Thankfully, the drizzling rain of the day prior hadn’t made a mud-hole out of
the ring, and the fog had lifted with the rising of the sun.
She
leaned into Rebel’s black neck, her back to his muscular shoulders, and hugged
his head, caressing his face in long strokes. The slow movements were as much
to keep her calm as they were for him. Waiting for final results had never been
so nerve-wracking. They were in first place, but four horses and riders
remained to make runs. The first team to follow them had taken down two bars,
which removed them from the running for first place.
So much hinges on today’s outcome.
Probably a really good thing Mom and Daddy couldn’t come. If
they were here watching, I’d probably be an even worse nervous wreck. She
had to remember to call them after she returned to the hotel that evening.
Check on Mom. And hopefully pass along good news.
Missy
closed her eyes, head down, and concentrated on her breathing. Please, Lord. All this hard work has to
amount to something. I just want to make everyone proud. Please.
The
crack of a hoof on wood followed by the hard thud of a bar hitting the dirt
sent her heart rate up. Another team out of the running. She glanced at the
clock. That team might manage fourth if they kept their time on track and
didn’t take down anymore bars. She took a shaky breath.
Rebel
shifted, sensing her growing excitement.
“Easy,
boy. Two more teams to go, and we’ll know.” She patted his massive neck to
soothe him.
Minutes
crawled by. And still they waited.
The
last team finally finished their run. Missy listened for their time. When the
announcement came, she forced herself not to jump up and down and cheer. Must
be dignified and grown-up. Mustn’t bounce around like an exuberant
twelve-year-old with no impulse control.
She
straightened tan breeches, white shirt, and black coat, snapped the harness on
her helmet, and checked the sheen on knee-high black boots. Then she walked
around Rebel to give him a once over, straightened his forelock, and smiled.
All looked good. She took a deep breath and mounted her horse. Giving him a pat
on the neck, she waited for the call to return to the ring.
*****
Missy
and Rebel exited the ring. Davis
waited to greet her with a proud smile. A champion who had retired a couple of
years prior due to a serious hip injury, Davis Gallagher had coached her since
the previous coach retired the year before. They’d started dating in early
April. At least, she supposed that’s what they’d been doing with the occasional
dinner out when Davis
had time. Although he was twenty-five years her senior, she was the envy of
many of the other female riders. She’d learned to ignore their catty comments.
She
shied away from thinking about the fact she should have told her parents about
their relationship long before now. Well, she had. Sort of. She’d mentioned to
her mother from time to time that they went out to dinner. Okay, so yeah, maybe
she’d let her believe they were business dinners. And she certainly hadn’t
admitted to any of her family that the man had kissed her. For some reason no
one could quantify, or perhaps would
quantify, her parents didn’t like Davis.
They’d even objected when she hired him as her new coach.
Maybe
today’s win would change their mind, and they’d see what a great coach he was.
If they’d just give him a chance, they’d find out what a nice guy he was.
A
broad smile wreathed his handsome face as Davis
leaned against the cane in his right hand. “See? I said you could do it.”
Missy
slipped off Rebel’s back into Davis’
waiting arms. He hugged her tight then loosened his grip to plant a toe-curling
kiss on her lips.
“I
should never have doubted you,” she said, out of breath. She hugged him again
to keep both feet on the ground and maintain her dignity. “And we couldn’t have
done it without you.”
“Damn
straight.” He chuckled and set a hand on her shoulder to push her away enough
that he could look down into her face. “So, what do you say we go out tonight
and celebrate?”
Her
heart pitter-pattered. Handsome, charming Davis Gallagher truly wanted to spend
time with her. A fairy tale in every way. Seven months into their dating
relationship, it was still surreal. She bit her lower lip and nodded. “I’d love
to.”
“Fabulous.
I’ll pick you up at eight.”
She
nodded, rose up on her toes to accept another kiss, then picked up the reins.
“I better take care of Rebel so I can get back to the hotel.”
Someone
across the grounds hollered for Davis.
He lifted a hand in acknowledgement. “Wear something special tonight.” His grin
hinted at a secret. Then he turned and walked into the milling crowd of horses,
riders, and spectators.
Missy
walked Rebel toward the stable. Wear something special? He’d never asked her to
do that before. And what was that grin about? What kind of secret was he
holding close? A new sponsor maybe? No. He’d never kept such things a secret
before. It had to be something else.
“Missy!”
She
halted. Rebel stopped patiently. She scanned the crowd. Not for the first time,
she wished she had reached at least her mother’s five-foot-seven height instead
of a measly five-three. She couldn’t see anything over all the heads and horses
around her. It was too reminiscent of getting lost in family gatherings,
dwarfed by everyone and everything around her.
“Missy.”
A hand popped above the crowd then a familiar face appeared. Dark brown hair,
brown eyes, and a gorgeous smile Missy had known all of her life.
“Aaron!”
A thrill shot through her. She hadn’t known he was coming.
He
broke free of the people between them and jogged to join her, scooping her into
his arms for a long, hard hug. When he finally set her down, chocolaty eyes
brimmed with joy matched only by a bright smile.
“What’re
you doing here?”
“I
came to see you. What else?” He threw both hands out to punctuate the question
and accidentally smacked a passing rider in the chest. “Oh, sorry.”
The
rider scowled, shook his head and kept walking.
Aaron
threw her a silly, somewhat embarrassed grin and said, “Oops,” with a soft
laugh. “Anyway, did you really think I’d miss one of your big events? You were beyond
wonderful.”
He
was way too good for her ego. “You didn’t need to come all this way, you know.”
Missy motioned him to follow her toward the stable. He immediately fell into
step beside her and Rebel. “I know you’re busy with work and all the travel you
have to do.”
“Ah,
who needs work?” He waved a hand and grinned.
“Aaron.”
She shook her head in disapproval.
He
rolled his eyes with a snort. “I’m kidding. My boss knows exactly where I am.”
His grin widened, laugh lines crinkling the corners of his eyes the way she’d
always found incredibly hot and appealing.
“Well,
that’s reassuring. I don’t want Daddy to fire you over me.” She sent him a
teasing look and handed Rebel off to a groom named Alex Finnegan.
The
stud planted all four feet and stood his ground. His ears flipped backward but
didn’t quite flatten to his head. He snorted softly.
Alex
hesitated. The man was new, so he wasn’t accustomed to Rebel, plus the horse
didn’t know him.
“Go
with him, Rebel.” Missy patted the horse’s shoulder and gave the groom a
reassuring smile. “Don’t let him kid you, Alex. He’s nothing but a big
sweetheart.”
“I
sure hope so.” The man’s look was dubious.
Rebel
gave her a disgusted look but followed the groom away.
“I
see he still lives up to his name.”
“Not
so much after a good run. He’s still my baby, so he listens to me.”
“Yeah,
well, might I remind you that baby
outweighs you by a thousand pounds?”
“Doesn’t
matter how big he is. He’s still my
baby.”
Aaron
shook his head and chuckled. “You really are so much like your mother.”
“Thanks!”
She gave him a bright smile.
“That
wasn’t necessarily a compliment, but take it as you will.” He laughed. Then he
shoved his fingertips in the front pockets of his jeans, suddenly looking
nervous.
She
cocked her head, completely befuddled. Aaron never got nervous. He was one of
the most self-assured, confident, easy-going people she knew. It was one of the
many things she’d always loved about him. Even if he would never see her as
anything but a little sister. But then, maybe if she’d ever had the courage to
kiss him senseless like she’d longed to for years, he wouldn’t be so blind to
the fact that she was a woman.
She
gave herself a mental shake. She was dating Davis, for pity’s sake. She shouldn’t allow
her mind to toy with such thoughts about boy-next-door, nothing-but-a-friend,
sees-me-as-a-sister Aaron Everett. Old habits insisted on rearing up. But that doesn’t mean you should entertain
them, you nit. Time for a grown-up relationship, not childish fantasies.
“What
do you say we go out to dinner tonight? Celebrate today’s victory.”
“Oh.”
The starch left her shoulders. “I can’t. I already have plans.” She wanted to
tell him more, but he hadn’t been very supportive when she’d told him months
ago about dating Davis.
In fact, he’d been rather hostile toward her coach as a result. She’d avoided
the subject since then.
“Oh,
well... that’s okay. Maybe another time.”
“I’d
love that.” Missy glanced toward the stable with regret. “I have to make sure
Rebel is settled in and get back to the hotel. I’m a bit short on time.” She
cocked her head to look up at him. “What about lunch or dinner tomorrow?”
“I
wish I could, but my flight leaves first thing tomorrow morning. I doubt I’ll
even have time for breakfast. Duty calls.” Disappointment matching hers colored
his tone, salving some of her regret.
“I’m
glad you came today.”
“So
am I.” He smiled, but it didn’t seem quite as bright and cheerful as before.
“Your dad told me they wouldn’t be able to make it today. I didn’t want you
left without a cheering section.”
Had
Aaron figured out she had plans with Davis
for the evening? If she didn’t bring it up, he wouldn’t either. She knew him
well enough to know that about him. Guilt prickled. She should be honest with
him.
Then
again, maybe he hadn’t a clue what her plans were and was disappointed about
not being able to spend time with her while they were in the same place.
Yeah.
She liked that possibility much more. She’d go with that one.
“I
better let you go,” he said after staring at her for a few moments. He pulled
her into a hug. “Congratulations on the win today. You earned it.”
“Thanks,
Aaron.”
“See
ya ‘round, short stack.”
She
took a playful swing, but he hopped back and laughed. “You know I hate it when
you call me that!” Would he ever stop calling her that? Or was she stuck with
the annoying label for the rest of her life?
“Touchy,
touchy.” He backed away. Then he stopped, humor fading. “Bye, Missy.” He turned
on his heel and walked off.
Missy
watched him go. Had he ever said goodbye before? Maybe. But not quite like
that. Like she may never see him again. She shook her head. Don’t be
ridiculous. Their parents were next door neighbors and closer than family. They
were bound to see each other for the coming holidays.
A
yell from the direction of the stable pulled her from her thoughts. She
listened. Was that someone hollering about or because of Rebel? The yell
repeated, this time more clearly. Nope. Nothing to do with her or Rebel. But
she headed for the stable anyway. Make
sure Rebel is settled for the night and get to the hotel. Davis will be prompt,
so you can’t be late.
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Not sure I've always seen a character's goal in the first page or even first chapter of most books I read.
ReplyDeleteWhat's wrong with getting to know the character first - allow her to grow - and her goals to grow within the story.
Why does her goal have to be blatant at the very beginning - what if she's UNSURE of her own goals at this point?
Good start - made me want to keep reading. . .